Respose to feedback

We thought some of the feedback was a little harsh and began to point out the negatives, but not giving us enough constructive feedback. However, some of the feedback gave us an idea of our positive points.

If we did this task again, we would add more clips to the storyline so that the title at the beginning didn't have to be so long. we would improve our editing, so that the transitions were more smooth so that the apple looked like it appeared out of no where with an appropriate sound effect.